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    Saturday
    Sep192009

    Immigrant Dreams 

    A child of two lands

    And two different cultures

    Driven to find greener pastures

    Fleeing from war, anguish and pain

    I came to this land hoping to gain

    A better life for my family and I

    A chance for us to do more than survive

     

    I came here a lifetime ago

    I crossed many waters to land on this shore

    A shore that held the promise of dreams fulfilled

    The promise of a life of which I only dreamed

     

    Here there would always be food and clean water

    And schooling for my daughter

    There would be no poverty, hunger or war

    And opportunities would flow outside my door

     

    What I found when I landed upon this shore

    Was not what I dreamed of a lifetime ago

    Problems abide in this foreign land

    They are just of a different nature from what I left behind

     

    There is still hunger but on a smaller scale

    No one wants to employ foreign workers

    Go back home they say

    So I work in a diner

    Although I have four degrees

    I toil and I sweat to meet my family’s needs

     

    I often dream of my home

    On that other shore

    I want to go back

    To where I was before

    But I cannot leave

    Not just yet

    I have growing children

    And a load of debt

     

    I will stay here just a few years more

    and then I will return to that other shore

    There is still hope in this land

    For dreams unfulfilled

    Hope for my children

    but not for my dreams.

     

    By Maureen Injete Chesoni

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    Reader Comments (8)

    Chillingly inspirational and beautifully written. Keep up the good work, and your head as well. :)

    September 21, 2009 | Registered CommenterRichard Archer

    This really touched me, since I am an inmigrant myself. Beautifull way to express our“s dreams!!.

    September 28, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterPedro Molina

    Hi Richard,
    Thanks so much for your lovely comment. I appreciate the encouragement and I am glad you enjoyed the poem.

    Hi Pedro,
    I have experienced life as a migrant and I know it can be tough sometimes. Keep going and I hope you achieve the fulfillment of your dreams. Thanks so much for your encouraging comment.

    Maureen Injete

    September 30, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterInjete Chesoni

    Maureen I just have to say this is a spectacular poem. If you could sum it up in one line what do you think the message would be?

    October 23, 2009 | Unregistered CommenterMary

    Hi Mary,

    Thank-you for your comment and sorry for taking so long to respond. It is difficult to sum up the message of this poem in one line. Mainly because it has many messages. Perhaps what I would most like people to take away from this poem is that every country has it's own advantages and disadvantages and achieving your dreams is not necessarily dependent on where you live but more so on the strength that you have within.

    March 17, 2010 | Unregistered CommenterInjete Chesoni

    hi the writer of this poem i am very impressed with it because it really conveys the hidden reality behind hoping to immigrate and the dire results of immigrating to a country that is very distinct from yuors . thank you so much i approciate it well

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    November 5, 2011 | Unregistered Commenterdnszrk dnszrk

    Thank-you for your comment and sorry for taking so long to respond.

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